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Juicebomb

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Everything comes together well in this. The chords, melody, the way you played some parts more softly, the mood, all of it works for the intro to an RPG.
I don't really like the reverb sound on it, though. It's kind of slathered all over the piece, which can be a little painful to hear, especially at the start. Something a bit more subtle would fit the piece more, IMO. Otherwise, solid composition!

CheckeredZebra responds:

Why thank you! I'll work on the reverb and try to make it less apparent; I guess I'll see how that sounds. =P

It has enough presence, don't you worry about it. It's tight, full and fun. The only bit that doesn't quite fit is the piano, it sounds like you sampled Final Fantasy and it just doesn't fit for something this fun. Otherwise, it's good, solid, lovely.

OcularNebula responds:

good, true, right

glad you thought it was FUN, despite the imperfections!

Around 2:26 where it started getting "choppy" (for lack of a better word) was my favourite part. The whole thing had potential, actually, but sadly the beginning and especially the ending sounded out of key/discordant. Like I said, you certainly have potential, and I'd love to see you improve! To do that, you need to get the hang of both keys and mixing. Once you've done that, I see good things ahead.

aslal responds:

I actually purposely put it out of tune at the end, trying to make some sort of creepy feel. I'll change the key a bit.

Gorgeous! I actually adore coming across songs with this kind of smooth, metallic feel to them, so this really hit the spot for me. I'm not sure I could really give you any constructive criticism, though, sorry. There's just nothing much that's wrong with this.

May I ask, did you slow the drums down? They kind of sound slowed down.

VaeVIKTUZ responds:

sorry for the late response, but yes i dropped the bpm of the drum samples, used a few one shots. and i glitch the samples by hand with a few simple effects and beat slicing. thanks for the compliment :)

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